Kay Kay

Thanx for the cheesy part sam! j/k i thought so too and wanted to see if anyone agreed. If i had known you thought so sooner i would have changed ...

LOL LOL LOL!!! No my x box! Matthew: Mary Jane, do not play with my x-box without permission again. Mary Jane: But, Matthew, I just- Matthew: No, no playing with ...

I liked it. It sounds like me when i'm bored and just thinking about what to write. I've written stuff in my room trying to get an inspiration and what ...

Yeah i finally get a chance to read it. Sorry it took so long but...anyways. I liked it and agree that it is the best post of Hourglass that you've ...

It was short but I enjoyed reading it. I also read part one as well and thought you did well on that too. Sorry I don't have a suggestion on ...

I see what you mean. Well in this part I was trying to discribe the love she had for Jack and how because of what happened the consequences that made ...

I'm glad there was more. I liked this too. It's short but worth reading. I envy you cause i can't write things in present tense along with a lot of ...

Yeah it did help alot. With what you put on here there is some things i'll have to correct you on: When you said that unmarried men would be called ...

I liked it. Um on the critting, the only problems i found with it were the same ones that Misty Lynn found. I can't wait to read more to find ...

Well, cute is what I'm going for. Skye is the drummer and Blane is the jock. I decided to make all her friends already at the mall and she had ...

I liked it. I can relate to the character Jen on how the voices in her head argue with whether she should or shouldn't hang out with them. I look ...

Yep

It actually got published in this book of young writers poems or something like that. I have the book too. When I posted this I didn't expect people to read ...

Thanx a bunch. I might be continuing on this but maybe not cuz I've had a major writers block and it's like coming back. Makes me want to scream. If ...

I agree. It does seem as though it's missing something. I liked it though. Good job. Keep up the good work!